About the Essay GuideBefore I explain what this book is, I'd like to say a bit about what it's not.
- It does not contain pre-written templates for you to memorize
- It does not spend pages and pages summarizing historical events and book plots (Wikipedia does that for free)
- It does not promise you a perfect essay score if you make up evidence, or fill 2 pages, or use every big word you know, etc.
- Development and support of point of view
- Organization and focus
- Grammar, usage, and mechanics
- Variety of sentence structure
- Use of vocabulary
The Essay Star
One reason I like the Essay Star is that it shows how two very different essays can end up getting the same score. The first star above represents an essay that's strong on some factors, and not so strong on others. The second one is much more even all the way through. Both get 8s.
I also like that it shows how hard it is to get a top score: if you want a 12, you'll need ALL FIVE POINTS of your star to be full. If your essay is devoid of a point of view, pumping it full of arcane vocabulary isn't going to get you a 12.
Anyway, I devote a section of the book to helping you address each point on the star.
Actually writing the essayOf course, an understanding of what's expected of you from a scoring perspective will not, on its own, deliver you the essay score of your dreams. You also need to know how to think through a prompt, plan, and write your essay in 25 minutes. Here's a hint: good planning take a little bit of time, but pays off.
Book owner's privilegesBeing able to write a good essay requires practice and useful feedback. Obviously, you can practice on your own, but you probably aren't the best judge of your own writing, so the feedback bit is a little trickier.
This is a work in progress and I'm open to your feedback as it evolves, but I've created a password-protected Tumblr blog where book owners can have a practice essay graded by me (in the form of an Essay Star, of course) and commented on by other book owners. The password is the 4th word on the top of page 27 in the Essay Guide. (Kindle owners, forward a copy of your Amazon receipt to mike[at]pwnthesat.com and I will respond with the password.)